i really like the way your title and image link in well with each other, the colour fits in with the title which makes it very effective. Also your contents page looks really professional, and is laid out really tidy and all straight to make it look professional. And i can see a lot of effort has gone into designing the photoshoot and the pictures on your double page spread.
I like how your font and colour relates to your masthead. You images are very nice and suit the style of magazine and would catch the readers attention. Your contents is layed out very well and is understandable. Think you could of arranged the photos better on the DPS and edited them more. :)
i think she's thought about the mise en scene alot because the photo's have been taken in an appropriate location and are well shot. I think the house style is really good; the fonts and colours flow through the whole magazine.
Everything ties in well together, you can tell its all from the same magazine.
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Very good magazine eye catching and well written. Maybe try manipulating some pictures.
ReplyDeletethe front page has a really nice layout and variety of different texts but the images dont seem to have a very storng sense of mise-en-scene
ReplyDeletei really like the way your title and image link in well with each other, the colour fits in with the title which makes it very effective. Also your contents page looks really professional, and is laid out really tidy and all straight to make it look professional. And i can see a lot of effort has gone into designing the photoshoot and the pictures on your double page spread.
ReplyDeleteI like how your font and colour relates to your masthead. You images are very nice and suit the style of magazine and would catch the readers attention. Your contents is layed out very well and is understandable. Think you could of arranged the photos better on the DPS and edited them more. :)
ReplyDeletei think she's thought about the mise en scene alot because the photo's have been taken in an appropriate location and are well shot. I think the house style is really good; the fonts and colours flow through the whole magazine.
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